you obviously know a lot about your topic and your presentation was very informative, but i had trouble following because, no offense, but you sort of had a boring monotone. i would spice it up a bit with different tones to your voice. also you did a great job of keeping pace except for that one instance at 1 minute when you sped up a ton. you also looked at your paper most of the time, so you should probably study your notes a little more and memorize them better. i know it was the first draft and we all did it, but we should improve on not looking at our notes the whole time.
Yea, I agree with what Zach said, it was a little monotone, and really formal... Try to relax and sound more like youre just talking about your talking, which will probably help when you put down your paper :) Overall, it was really good! Maybe you can analyze a little more to balance the amount of facts you have :)
you obviously know a lot about your topic and your presentation was very informative, but i had trouble following because, no offense, but you sort of had a boring monotone. i would spice it up a bit with different tones to your voice. also you did a great job of keeping pace except for that one instance at 1 minute when you sped up a ton. you also looked at your paper most of the time, so you should probably study your notes a little more and memorize them better. i know it was the first draft and we all did it, but we should improve on not looking at our notes the whole time.
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I also liked the part where you explained the map of Babylon. it was very interesting and kept me hooked in.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the advice guys! I'll comment on yours when they are up... :)
ReplyDeleteYea, I agree with what Zach said, it was a little monotone, and really formal... Try to relax and sound more like youre just talking about your talking, which will probably help when you put down your paper :)
ReplyDeleteOverall, it was really good!
Maybe you can analyze a little more to balance the amount of facts you have :)