Try to be more confident and passionate about what you are talking about. Your subject is intersting and intense so you should act the same way.(like being torched, by a giant) You do a good job explaining and and giving detail. Overall, i think its good.
Try to be more confident and passionate about what you are talking about. Your subject is intersting and intense so you should act the same way.(like being torched, by a giant) You do a good job explaining and and giving detail. Overall, i think its good.
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