laura, your content is great. As Mr. Newman said, you should cut a little of the ums, and stuff like that. Also you you are loud and project your voice which is always good. Make sure you have notes to remember your information because you were a little shaky! Overall, great job
A bit less hand movement, less hesitation, and cut some unesscart commentary?
ReplyDeleteNice Fluidity, and confidence. Good Eye Contact.
Yay, Laura!!
laura, your content is great. As Mr. Newman said, you should cut a little of the ums, and stuff like that. Also you you are loud and project your voice which is always good.
ReplyDeleteMake sure you have notes to remember your information because you were a little shaky!
Overall, great job