Good voice and a lot of info try not to shift back and forth in place i know that you hadn't practice much but slow down just a tiny bit sometimes your info was hard to follow, pretend that your talking to third graders and keep going back to your point work on you pauses some are long and not needed maybe be more conversational, it engages you audience i like that your ending seemed like it was ending, not just stopping abruptly make sure that you go back to your question in the conclusion overall good job (Laura)
Good voice and a lot of info
ReplyDeletetry not to shift back and forth in place
i know that you hadn't practice much but slow down just a tiny bit
sometimes your info was hard to follow, pretend that your talking to third graders and keep going back to your point
work on you pauses some are long and not needed
maybe be more conversational, it engages you audience
i like that your ending seemed like it was ending, not just stopping abruptly
make sure that you go back to your question in the conclusion
overall good job (Laura)