Good job Vanessa :) You read off the paper a lot less than when we did it in class, so that's good! Uh, maybe try to indroduce your question before the 2 minute mark so it's easier to follow some of London's history. What I wrote down the first time we did it was to work on transitions, liven up the intro, and you said um a bunch of times (which you fixed:)) Overall, nice job :)
good job! I agree with Ally that you should prorbably introduce your question a little sooner so it is easier to understand some of the history. Also, you could probably liven up your intro... good luck! :)
Good job Vanessa :)
ReplyDeleteYou read off the paper a lot less than when we did it in class, so that's good!
Uh, maybe try to indroduce your question before the 2 minute mark so it's easier to follow some of London's history.
What I wrote down the first time we did it was to work on transitions, liven up the intro, and you said um a bunch of times (which you fixed:))
Overall, nice job :)
good job!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Ally that you should prorbably introduce your question a little sooner so it is easier to understand some of the history.
Also, you could probably liven up your intro...
good luck! :)